Hai Intezaar.Kahan ho tum?
Kabhi-kabhi aata hai dil me khayaal,
ki meri zindagi me bhi ho koi bemisaal,
ki saath lage jiska aisa roohani,
ki uske saamne ho jaye duniya bemaani.
Miloon jo usse to ehsaas ho kuch khaas,
door hoke bhi lage ki hai wo kahin paas,
samjhe mujhe mujhse bhi zyada,
wo jise keh sakoon mai apna hissa aadha.
Hai mujhe us shakhs ka intezaar,
jispe ho mujhe itna aitbaar,
ki poori karoon uski har ek khwahish,
bhale kar raha ho wo mere pyaar ki aazmaish.
Ta umra chal sakoon mai jiske saath,
aur keh sakoon jisse dil ki har baat,
kabhi-kabhi aata hai dil me khayaal,
kabhi-kabhi aata hai dil me khayaal................................
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Hey my utterances,
Thanks for the complement .
Ruchi.
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hi Shootradhar,
Aap sahi keh rahe hain ki pyaar ko aazmaya nahi jaata lekin kabhi-2 aazmaane ko jee chahta hai dil ki tasalli ke liye jab ki hame maloom hota hai ki saamne waala hame kitna pyaar karta hai.
tareef ke liye shukriya!!
Ruchi.
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Nice piece of poetry!
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Ruchi...
" Bhale wo kar raha ho wo mere pyaar ki Aajmaish "....Pyaar ko kabhi Ajmaya jata hai...?....Pyaar Ya tao hota hai ya phir Nahi hota hai......Agar hota hai tao wah naa dikhte hue bhi humesha mahsoos kiya jaa saqta hai bina aajmaish ke...!
....KKawita ki Kasauti par ek sarahneey Rachna !
Shootradhaar !
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Thanks Pooja,
Thanks for ur suggestions.Yes,I have finally posted it .
Luv,
Ruchi.
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Wow Ruchi wat a beautiful composition
....So finally u hv posted da most awaited one....it was nice discussing wid u da title of this beautiful poem.Keep writing some more of this kind and don't forget to discuss da title wid me once again....
Cheers...
Keep Writing...
Pooja
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Thanks for the complement as well as the suggestion.Will try that.It's not a geet .It's just a poem.
Regards,
Ruchi.
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Thanks a lot .I love to write in Hindi with a tinch of Urdu.You can read "Zindagi ki Raah" -another composition of mine which is also in same language.
Will definitely read ur compositions.
Regards,
Ruchi
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Wah!!Bahut hi khoobsoorat hai aap ka yeh geet....Hindi fonts me post karti to aur bhi khoobsurat lagta....HIndi typing is as easy as English these days...you can use vishal typing pad..it is available at google......yash
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Dear Ruchi,
you are good--you are using HINDUSTANI(Urdu mixed with hindi in Devnagari script). It is very impressive,. This is the first time i am on your blog. I am sure you will produce some more gems. i liked this stanza:-
Miloon jo usse to ehsaas ho kuch khaas,
door hoke bhi lage ki hai wo kahin paas,
samjhe mujhe mujhse bhi zyada,
wo jise keh sakoon mai apna hissa aadha.
Good one dear. Carry on. might like to read some of my compositions in Hindustani. welcome. regards. rajee.
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